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Five Nights at Betty's

Posted by TardisCowStartler - December 11th, 2018


One of my comedy fanfic drabbles, a NuWho/Scooby Doo/Golden Girls crossover. Because I can. I guess I'm using this for possible (currently free as I have no bank account) commissions, since I picked it for that and all. So, yeah, I do rough writing, script-look-overs, etc. I don't actually write scripts, as I haven't written one since middle school; that one was a joke script for a partnered assignment.


Basically, it was:


Three 1700s-ish philosophers walk into a Krispy Kreme's.


Anyway, yeah, I'll look over your existing work and see if the wording makes sense, mood, tone, suggestions in that area. Nothing fancy. Anywho, here ya go.


FIVE NIGHTS AT BETTY'S.


The Doctor reached out of the closet and pulled Daphne in with her, shutting them both in.


Daphne yelped, but the Doctor stuffed her hand in the girl’s mouth and whispered harshly, “Rassilon’s sakes don’t screech! You’ll only bring her round again and then where will we be?”


Daphne wibbled and moaned, then relaxed in the Doctor’s grip.


“But Doctor! What about Fred and Scooby? And Velma?”


The Doctor narrowed her eyes and added, “…forgot somebody, didn’ ya?”


Daphne blinked, thinking.


“…no.”


In the kitchen, a wobbly voice screamed, “Like, help me Scoob! Rose Nyland has an ice cream scoop!”


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